Three years old Iru woke up to a misty morning with a broad
grin on his face. He was completely oblivious to the world around him. The world
which was tattering away in pieces and innocent Iru was still trying to join
the pieces together as he did with his animal puzzle set. For him life was just
about making and breaking the puzzle. He spent hours juggling the pieces and
joining them correctly. With each piece into its place, Iru would elate with
happiness.
But that morning was different. He was not able to find his
puzzle set and was petrified to see his house full of people. People he could
not recognize. People who were sighing looking at Iru. Some embraced him, some
began to sob and some handed him notes rupee 10 and 20. Iru felt perturbed. His
eyes were restlessly moving through the crowd to find his father but he was
nowhere to be found. He felt his heartbeats hard and feared not seeing his
father again. A moment later he saw his father coming through the crowd towards
him.
Iru said,”I thought you went away with mother”
His father gave him a smile and said,” I can’t. Not till you
want me to go.”
“I would never want you to go.”
“Do you love me?”
“Yes”
“More than baba?”
Iru didn’t answer and Adil felt his heart in his mouth.
Adil was a man in his early 30s. Leaving his native village
where he lived since he was born was more than just difficult. He had made a conscious
decision of leaving the village after his wife passed away due to a prolonged
illness. There was no hospital in the vicinity of the village and the
dispensary doctors kept asking Adil to take his wife to the city. But he had no
money. He never had. He worked for the village Sarpanch and was dependent on
his charity which was just not enough to keep his wife alive.
Sarpanch was the richest man of the village and lived with
his wife in the haveli which was big enough to accommodate more 30 people. But he
had no children. He once asked Adil to give him his son but Adil refused
vehemently and threatened to leave the job to which Sarpanch pacified him and
said it was all in humour.
But it was not in humour.Whole of the village talked
between the sheets of the Sarpanch’s desire to adopt Iru. He was always buying
gifts for him asked Adil to get Iru along with him to work.
After Adil’s wife died, Sarpanch started visiting Iru more
and more and the deep down desire was coming out loud and clear. Adil was
always sceptical of his visits and tried to keep Iru away from him but the
effort was futile. Iru developed a liking for Sarpanch and would ask for him on
days he could not visit. Iru’s inclination towards the old man was becoming
more and more profound which made Adil anxious and one day he decided to end it
all.
He bid farewell to his village mates of 30 years and put Iru
on his shoulders. It was 5 AM in the morning but he decided against waiting and
set out. He had spent only an hour packing his home of 30 years and was taking
only few meagre things with him. He started to walk towards the bus stop in a
fast pace so that Iru would not notice sarpanch’s house. He had not allowed Iru
to take any of the presents Sarpanch has given him including his favourite
jigsaw puzzle. Iru spotted the house and pointed at the balcony where he and Sarpanch
sat for hours and played.
“Can I play with Baba one last time? I promise I would not
love him more than you”
A tear fell from Adil’s eyes and he continued to walk but
not to the bus stop. He has now solved his own jigsaw puzzle.
7 comments:
its a good start...i must say :)
i like the jigsaw puzzle metaphor..
keep it up! :D
Poignant. Mirrors reality. All the best.
Excellent attempt at Fiction dear. But I've a question to ask You,
"How do You discover the name Iru? " :)
A wonderful story. Deep and powerful. Moved me deeply. An exquisite and spell binding narrative. :) Beautifully written. All the best for the contest. :)
i just started with nothing particular in my mind, it just shaped its way ahead..:-)
thankyou so much!
read your story a day back and liked the narration and the way you have created it.
all the best to you too:-)
amazing, honestly for the first time i read the entire stuff, normally i would skip paragraphs, but this story had some factor to it, and made me wonder what was coming next.......:)
all the best for the competition!...:)
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